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Bungee vs Machi by Animewave-Neo Bungee vs Machi by Animewave-Neo
This illustration is a art trade with :iconfbende:

The ninja thief Bungee vs macha elf girl Machi

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Happy Birthday FBende !!!

Bungee and Machi are oc of :iconfbende:
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:iconscoots-buragi:
Well okay let's begin shall we mate!

First off, I'm very sure Bungee's arm would never achieve the postion its in to hold that sword to block the beam, since their is already a bend in within the joints, the shoulder would not allow the arm to go back so far or even get that straight, in fact I almost pulled my arm from my shoulder to see if I could even do that. Also for Machi's left arm since that arm hides near the back, that hand shouldn't be the same size as her right since that's the arm in front of her current position, in fact after looking over the entire artwork, there is no prospective, anywhere. [link] <-- Tried finding lessons for it but I found examples of how it should work, Machi's left arm should have a thinning like effect all the way to her hand to provide the effect and her left leg should appear a slight less shorter than the right since that is still behind, but for even such a pose whilst in air by Machi is not possible, the right leg is in an imaginary pose which is not anatomically correct.

Look around, your art community is filled with all sorts of tutorials on action poses like these!:
[link]
Tumblrs too!: [link]

Also your torsos on female characters fall a little too short, an example showing how the female's body is actually built: [link]

Overall more of D- in my book, it would be an F to me if not for the colori-....

I stand corrected, things for lighting sources: [link]

The moon is out but its clearly a foggy/cloudy sense and the shading and light sources are imperfect, the moonlight should be their backs mostly and since a laser beam has been fired, there should be a strong source of light from the effects of the flare with is not present, I really wanted to give a more generous rating but after looking more into this, its not pretty, there's not even a lighted flare upon the sword to show the deflection of the beam at all. That sword should be lit up along with that effect surrounding it.

Oh yeah more female anatomy for you, because you don't know how boobs work: [link]
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Uma bela imagem meu amigo, sem duvida um pequeno mais importante diferencial na sua galeria , considerando o tipo de personagem que a machi é bem como na primeira e bela aparição da bungee.:w00t!:

boa postura para as duas que aumenta ainda mais o valor e força de expressão das duas, deixando os olhos de ambas com uma chama muito interessante. O cabelo volumoso deixa ambas lindas apesar do perigo da situação.:love:

A posição delas ficou boa, em especial para a machi. O outfit da ambas esta bonito e detalhado.^^

boa sombreamento e luz. acredito que nesta parte voce poderia por mais luz na bungee mas esta o.k mesmo assim.

Bom trabalho e tributo meu amigo.:#1:
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:iconstrangerataru:
Strangerataru Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No fair, the elf has a laser cannon hand!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
yes
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:iconzehdd:
Zehdd Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love your stuff.
Starfield looks a little rushed. Perhaps another brush style, or even another realistic starfield with some filters would look REALLY nice.

All critiques are done out of love. Keep it up, my friend!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
thank you very much ^^
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:iconfto-sete:
FTO-Sete Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Grande arte Olavo ! Voce já fez outras imagens de dramaticas de impacto antes, mas essa não ficou nada dever, mandou bem no embate de Bungee e Machi nesse trabalho! :)
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
valeu ai, Luciano
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:iconcaminhax:
CaminhaX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
nossa mais uma batalha! mulher ninja essa e nova!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
^^
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:iconrodriguis:
rodriguis Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sabe, elas ficaram bem legais no seu estilo, Olavo. :clap:
Gosto de poses de confronto assim, é bem o Tigre o Dragão. Só o efeito da rajada é que eu achei uma pena esconder a Bungee (tá ok, ela é uma ninja! :lol:), seu traço é maravilhoso! Mas o resto tá um luxo só. Hehehe :)
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Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
valeu ai, Rodrigo
bom, como a turma ficava me perguntado como seria a Bungee no meu estilo, creio que matei a curiosidade de muita gente
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:iconozwick:
ozwick Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
What a gorgeous picture! The epic scope of it is like some Renaissance church ceiling fresco. Great colors and ray-gun effects as well.
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
thank you
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
wonder who'll win?
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
good question
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
mmhmm
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:iconlpsalsaman:
Lpsalsaman Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really cool!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thank you
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:iconlpsalsaman:
Lpsalsaman Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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:iconcyberdyne101:
CYBERDYNE101 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes!!!
I absolutely love that sexy ninja gal!!!
She can have all my winnings if she wins!!!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thanks a lot
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:iconcyberdyne101:
CYBERDYNE101 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime :)
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:icondanluna:
DanLuna Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012   General Artist
Love the laser effects -pew- -pew-
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thank you
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:icondanluna:
DanLuna Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   General Artist
Welcome
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Shockzboy Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
:iconspacecoreplz::iconsaysplz: SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!!!!!
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
yes ^^
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:iconfelipemaker-br:
FelipeMaker-BR Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gostei. Ficou bem dinâmico
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
valeu ^^
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:icongamepal:
gamepal Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is awesome!:)
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thanks
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:iconp-z-p-z:
P-z-p-Z Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome.
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thank you
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:iconp-z-p-z:
P-z-p-Z Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome.
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:iconmcsteel:
McSteel Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Verry nice work on the BG. ^^
The poses are nice as well. =3
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thanks a lot
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:iconmcsteel:
McSteel Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome buddy. ^^
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:iconcaptain-paulo:
Captain-Paulo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
bem legal amigo
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
valeu
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Godforoth Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
I love the elf!!!! :3
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thanks
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:icongodforoth:
Godforoth Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
You're welcome!! ;3
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swordofcoke Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Yeah! space katana laser battles are the best.
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
I agree
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:iconballoonprincess:
BalloonPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Very cool work! :)
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
thank you, Princess
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:iconballoonprincess:
BalloonPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
:heart::heart::heart:My pleasure!:heart::heart::heart:
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:iconstretchygalfan:
StretchyGalFan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I had to check through your DA Gallery first, but I think this is the first time I've seen you draw :iconfbende:'s Bungee (and Machi)!

Nice trade and birthday celebration! :D
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
yes, in fact this is my firt draw with them ^^
thank you ^^
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:iconmega-man-king:
Mega-Man-King Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My money's on Machi.
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:iconanimewave-neo:
Animewave-Neo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
^^
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